Almost Hell part 2

The shoot was good however i don't think the outcome was as good as it could have been. In my opinion these are like every other in the subject, they don't stand out, almost boring if i was to go that far. I think should again ad go almost to another level. The images need to be a lot darker, although i don't want to go as far as amateur porn.

Im thinking; props, maybe another person, slight/ subtle use of colour more obvious with what is happening, maybe take aspects from the shoot with Frankie and get more involved with lighting.

I find that these images are away from the point of my work/ project. When looking through my images i find myself distracted, being thrown into a world of abuse and sexual references, instead of getting a sense of being trapped and wanting to escape, or being smouthered. I think the only way you get that from these images is that she may not want to be there, however the detail shows its almost like she enjoys the attention like its a game.

I have been looking at images from Brian Moss.

http://brianmoss.com/home.htm

(Go to women on the opening screen and scroll about half way down the page).